Do you like the first chapter of my book(it is short)?

As you are already aware, your writing contains numerous spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. If you are truly interested in writing well (and intriguingly), you'll have to learn to write legibly, obviously. That said, what you've written is interesting, inspires my desire to know what will follow, what is actually happening... Therefore, I would encourage you to develop it further. However, take the time to embellish your concept and to write it well and not hurriedly. If you want to sell your story eventually, you'll need to present it in the acceptable form. Good luck!